GRADE 5 ELA

COMPOSITION PROJECTStory Ideas 

I think the storys name should be the mystious man.

I think one of the main characters should be a strong man named Johnathon.

A boy went to the Co-op.

 I think one of the charecters should be a man named tim but his real name is anthony hes wanted but no one can find him hes also a murdarer.

A man comes in to town and people go missing but at the end they find the childern and the man was making a nice honted  house and everyone loves it.

ithink one of the kids nicknames should be quacky mcquackerson

I think one of the kids names should be kim

I think a  boys nickname should be mr.imp because he plays pranks

i think one of the charecters should be a girl named amy.

I think the stories name should be stranger

i think one of the charecters should be don

Middle-The kids go to the house that night and the little sister came to.  The brother is about to talk to her and she is gone. The next day he comes back from school he ask were is my sister and his mom says I think she went to her friends house but she actally helping with the haunted house. 

This is an interesting idea Q.H.

 I have a feeling we can use it.  Let's take a look on Monday

.Mr. J.

i think the dogs name should be dot

I think that one of the characters names should be Arg because he likes to argue with people and his real name is

Alexxander but he prefers the name arg. (sheridan)

yo nothang gona ever

I like the idea that there is an outer set of doors (or bomb shelter) that the kids go in near the house and then find a narrow passage way or tunnel that leads into the basement of the "haunted looking" house.  When they get into the basement they find.............??? [ I think this was an idea that talked about out loud or that one of the kids had written in their book ]...I think that it could really work into the story.

Mrs. D